Audience feedback (Rough Edit)

Now that we have finished the rough edit of our music video project we have attempted to get as much audience feedback as possible from asking people to watch the video and review it as well as having another focus group with the people from our previous group so that we can get the opinions of people who enjoy the genre as see how the video compares to what they expected from our alternative rock music video.

Verbal feedback-

From showing people that we know we have managed to gain insight into what they feel is wrong about the product and how they feel it could be changed. One of the main point which was a evident problem was that in some areas we had to find different shots as the camera work was poor and could be improved as so we searched through the shots we had of the bad as there was one scene which was pointed out towards the end and we changed the shot. Another shot people didn't like was when Alex first enters the kitchen and so we have changed that shot to one which is more stable and further away making it a mid shot instead of a close up.
Upon first watch many people pointed out that the establishing shot of Alex and the mannequin is too long and that it should somehow be changed and so we have done this as Bayley bladed the shot so that we could add in a different angle for the same length of time to give some variety to the opening scene so it isn't taken up by mostly one shot. Instead of this long opening shot we added a close up of Alex and the mannequin.

Focus Group-
This is a video of the first focus group we did which shows what the target audience wanted in the music video:


This is the most recent focus group that we did where the participants talk about what they enjoyed about the video we created partly based on what our first participants said in the first focus group and what the 2nd group would change about it: